Discussion on Xiaobing's review comments on TR-512.8 Control draft v1.6.
- Nigel has reviewed Xiaobing's comments upto section 7.5.3.2
- Nigel will handle the straight forward comments by himself
- The following comments were discussed
- 3.3.2: On the duplicated attribute name "_receiveFilter"
- Nigel explained that one is from the incoming request, and the other one is from the response to the previous incoming request. Since they are the association-end-role-names of different associations, so there is no issue in the UML Papyrus. Anyway, he will give them different names so that to avoid the confusion.
- 3.8: The paragraph below the bullet list

- On the first comment: Will reword, something like "... and the capability of the controller itself"
- 2nd comment, agree with the deletion. Will add a footnote.
- 5.1.17: Item 1 below Figure 5-4 "Breaks multiple requests into single requests"

- Will improve the wording to emphesize the intent is to break into singular independent transactions.
- Nigel will carry on starting from the comment on section 7.5.3.2.
- Aim to complete by next week.